Oh night, sweet night.
Please, don’t pass me by.1
Oh stars, sweet stars.
Please, don’t-go-down tonight.
Stay high, keep shining.
Shine even in the light of day.
Don’t go, Don’t stop.
Just keep me hanging on!
Fireworks
far away
light the way
touch a star
and become
enchanted.
Little sister, sweet sister.
Let’s do a moonwalk, together.
Oh Moon, smooth Moon,
shining spinning soft and slender–
Let this sweet night last forever.
Please, don’t go
don’t-go-down
keep dancing
around and around!
Please, stay high
high on night
and keep shining
on and on and on!
This poem is set to the music from “Oh Love” song by Green Day.
1–This one line is directly taken from the song.
Posted over at dverse where Merril D Smith is hosting poetics. Today’s prompt is “connections”.
M. Jay Dixit, 2021
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🖤 🙂
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Delightful!
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Thank you very much, David!
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Wow it is really beautiful Jay.
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Many Thanks, Krishna! (^_^)
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The night sky is a primal connection I think. (K)
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so well said, I agree with you, K :))
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Starry starry night revisited. Well penned!
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Thanks, Bev! (^_^)
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Beautiful connection to the wonders of the night, Jay! It is dark but you made it bright
Hank
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Thanks a lot, Hank! (^_^)
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I think we’ve all had those nights of magic that we don’t want to end.
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Oh yes, I agree, Merril! Thank you very much 🙂
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You’re very welcome!
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It’s so upligting and love the stars shinning so bright with the music Jay!!!!!! I think you should sing it and post it!1 ❤️❤️👏👏👏👏👏
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well I never thought of that! also I don’t have a very good singing voice. hehe I’m glad you liked it Cindy! Many thanks❤️❤️
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… you connected everything beautifully!!!
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Many thanks, Helen! 🙂
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Enjoyed your poem but, now I have Starry starry night looping in my head. That is my favorite painting.
Some nights you wish would last …
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I love the painting! Thank you very much (^_^)
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I love to walk around and night and star gaze when I can! There is some connection that is found on a deep level looking up into the night sky. Beautiful! 🌙🤩🌟🌠✨
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Thank you so much, Tricia! ❤️❤️
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Feel free to guest post on diosraw.com by going to this blog’s connect page.
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Thanks very much, Amber. It’d be an honor!
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Awesome!
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Maybe we could guest post for eachother?
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Sorry Amber, no offense to you but I like to keep my blog free of awards and guest posts for now. Maybe in the future I’ll change my mind. 🙏❤
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Sure
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Wow. such a starry beautiful night!
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Many thanks, Shreya! (^_^)
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Love it Jay… so awesome with your the graphics!
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Thanks so much, Cindy! ^_^
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You’re sooooo welcome Jay!! 💖
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Hey Cindy, just checking in about today’s Fri Yay Funday When is it gonna be up? (I am ready with my post and will ping it to yours before posting it!)
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Morning Jay!!! Patience is a virtue.. lol..
💖 coming soon dearest ! ❤️
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hehe ❤️ we’ll have to meet after 30 mins, I am going to take dinner, sorry for the same messages at two places,, ~Jay
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always best to catch me here until you can ping.. lol. i’ll be ready. lmk🌷
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