I went out to the hazel wood,
–The Song of Wandering Aengus, W. B. Yeats
Because a fire was in my head.
Butcher Bob’s confession:-
I ran into her in the alley, I remember her young face but can’t recall her name. It’s like this with most of them. I was using crutches and I asked her to help me carry the briefcase out of my car, which she did, when we reached the car, I knocked her unconscious with crowbar. Then I placed her in the shotgun seat and went straight to my chopping blocks in the hazel wood.
I went out to the hazel wood because a fire was in my head. A burning sensation, hot and vivid. When I completely submitted to that fire, it was like I was reborn, a phoenix from the flames. But only for a moment. Because, the ingredients for ignition of the next fire were always present in the ashes, and the burning inside my head began again.
144 words.
© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2021 All Rights Reserved
Inspired by the dverse prompt: Prosery, The Song of Wandering Aengus and posted over at Open Link Night #284
Very horrifying! Giving me Ted Bundy vibes here.
So well-written and I love how you implemented the line in this piece. That was brilliant!
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Thank you, dear Lucy ❤
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Thank you for pinging back your post, Jay. Unfortunately, it was a bit late to link to Mister Linky, but I picked it up through my messages on WordPrress. Such a dark and chilling piece. I like the way you start right in the middle of the action, writing from the perspective of the serial killer, and the way you explain his compulsion to kill.
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Oh well, it doesn’t matter, I’m glad you could come here.
When I first read your prompt a few days back, the first thing that came to my mind was a crazy man with a fire in his head, heading to the woods. So I started there and was happy with the story that came out in the end!
Thank you, Kim 🙂
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This is really chilling. I watched a documentary about the Yorkshire Ripper the other day (a serial killer from the UK in the 1970s) I suppose something like this must have been going on in his head.
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Yes something like this, I guess we can’t really ever know what exactly and it’s a good thing! Thank you, Ingrid.
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Yes, I think I would rather not know! But I do wonder how people get so ill in their heads…
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Yeah I’m curious too! and that’s why they get so much publicity. In the media circles there’s a saying: ‘If it bleeds, it leads’ which fits perfect here.
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This makes a real thriller if the story persists the way it is going. Love it for the mystery that is building up, Jay!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank! (^_^) Actually, the first draft was around 300 words long, with an extra character of a detective. But I had cut it short because of the word limit. Maybe I’ll delve deeper into the story later.
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This is a chilling tale, but it captures the psychotic mind. (K)
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Thank you, (K) yeah, it’s where the prompt took me.
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So chilling! I imagine that’s what it must feel like for a serial killer–that compulsion that just keeps getting stronger.
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Thank you 🙂 I’ve given my best shot at coming up with a metaphor close to how I feel about that sick compulsion of a serial killer.
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I’ve done some reading on some of them for books I’ve written, and it creeps me out!
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Yeah but curiosity still remains!
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Woah, good one, Jay
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I love it 😍👍
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yay! Thank you DR 🙂
I am glad you do my friend!
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Wicked. I like this very much.
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Thank you (◕‿◕)
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What a chilling perspective… it seems like he really wants to stop but cannot… I hope he will get caught (both for him and any of his future victims)
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Thanks for reading, Björn. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Vivid and insightful, Jay! ❤ We are always tortured by "whodunit?" Even more tortuous is "What were their thoughts and motivations?" All the best!
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Thank you Cheryl, yeah that torturous curiosity is always there, I’ve tried to answer it with my best shot! Take care ❤
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In my opinion, you nailed it, Jay!
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yay! I am glad you think so, Cheryl!
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A thriller so chilling Jay.
After reading all of the hazel wood pieces I don’t want to go there ever!💖🤣
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LOL seriously! Most of them were dark stories, I especially remember David’s ‘Quiet Place’ That was a damn good thriller flash fiction!
Thank you kindly, Cindy. 💖
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