Alive and burning
Inside scarlet rose petals
A secret furnace
I bloomed triumphantly, beneath dim-amber skies, in the dawn of this world’s first day. The Sun rose, the sunlight falling upon the field, a weight of gold. I’ve travelled around the world, opened my heart, shouted in the Sun to everything that’s alive. They smelled my fragrance and rejoiced. I’ve felt love; red, hot and vivid, the smell of lovers as they laid upon the field. Melancholy; white, the rain washed me away, as I laid upon the grave.
a sky of billion stars, flickers-flickers;
in the night of this world’s last day,
a field of billion roses, flickers-flickers.
–© dixitmrityunjay, 2020. September heart-to-hearts.
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Beautiful poetry!
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Thankyou bro🙌🏻🙂 glad you liked it!
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Exquisite tribute to the rose. There at dawn’s first day, world’s last day, and every moment in between.
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Thankyou v much!😊 I love roses
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Really stunning! I just loved the tenderness of your words and could almost hear them spoken. Beautiful 🙂
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Thankyou.. I’m glad you enjoyed it😊🙏
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A beautiful and fitting tribute to a rose 🌹
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Big thanks, Ingrid 🙂 Glad you appreciate!
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Is it ok to republish the full text of the poem on my blog when I publish the results of the challenge? I will of course link back to your original entry! If you’d prefer not, I can simply post the link. Please let me know what you prefer.
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You may post the full text, Ingrid. It’d be my pleasure 🙂
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Congratulations! https://experimentsinfiction.com/2020/08/11/eif-poetry-challenge-3-the-results/
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Many thanks Ingrid!
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You’re welcome 😊
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
exceptional !
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I DO BEG TO DIFFER ON ONE POINT—“PROSE” GENERALLYY REFERS TO WRITING THAT IS NOT..POETRY. HAIBUN IS A FORM OF POETRY. FACT CHECK ME ON THIS…VIA DICTIONARY OR WIKIPEDIA, PLEASE. BUT A FURNACE IN A ROSE—BRILLIANT-!!!!!!!! 😀
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“Haibun is a poetry form that combines a haiku with a prose poem. Haibun prose is usually descriptive. It uses sparse, poetic imagery to evoke a sensory impression in the reader. A haibun is a highly focused testimony or recollection of a journey composed of a prose poem and ending with a meaningful murmur of sorts: a haiku”
~ poets.org
I hope that clears up your confusion, sir. Thank you very much for reading and re-blogging. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem / prose HEHE! 🙂
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AH—HAIBUN PROSE! I STAND HUMBLY CORRECTED, SIR! GLAD I SAID TO FACT CHECK! 😀
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Well, I’m glad I could be of help (^_^) And please don’t call me sir, dear Jonathan. In India, it’s a tradition to call senior people sir and hence I find it a bit weird to call senior people like yourself by name. That’s the reason I call you sir. You may call me Jay. 🙂
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THEN, LAY, I AM GLAD YOU TOLD ME…! 😀
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Wow, this is amazingly beautiful Jay. Loved the choice of words you selected to give us a unique poem. Good job Jay 👌👌👌
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Thank you, Off Shore Writer. 😁🤝❤
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Oh halibun or haiku with a prose, it’s lovely no matter how you stream it!
Great poem! 💖
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Big thanks, Cindy! 💖
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Wow, this one is really beautiful. Seems like i can’t escape reading it.
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Yay! That’s a beautiful compliment, Krishna thanks a lot🙂♥️
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Haha. It’s my pleasure to read your creation.
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