calls for
strong resolution
revolution
calls for
acting on one’s
own voilition
revolution
calls for
ending phony allusions
to old generations,
breaking
illusion of evolution
and it’s the solution
to problem of
pollution
river or ocean
revel volution
of water
caused by evaporation
and make rain
Rain falls down
due to gravitation
when seasons change
due to
Earth’s
Revolution.
Ps: to ‘revel’ means to celebrate in lively and noisy way, ‘volution'(meaning rolling or revolving motion) is here used to depict the phenomenon of Water Cycle.
Also linked to dverse where merrildsmith is hosting tuesday poetics, prompt: Write a poem (in any form) about revolution.
Thanks for reading!
© dixitmrityunjay, 2020. September heart-to-hearts
love this a great creative take and clear statement about the state of our world!
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Many thanks, sweet Kate 🙂
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This is unique Jay. You can write poem on anything… keep writing more. ✌
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Thanks for the constant support! I’m really glad 🙂
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😊😊
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Good one!!!
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Thank you very much, Dr. Era 🙂
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😊😊
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I loved all the rhyming sounds. We definitely need a revolution to keep the earth revolving and us on it.
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That’s true, Thank you Merril, I’m very glad you loved it🙂
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LOVE this. I adore the rhyme scheme as well. Brilliantly penned and composed.
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Many thanks for the appreciation, Lucy🙂
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and it will rain. eventually.
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Yeah, you’re right as rain😁 thanks for dropping by, I’m glad🙂
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I like the layout, Jay, the way you took the work ‘revolution’ and played with it, and the rhymes with ‘-tion’ endings. It would make an excellent rap.
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I’m a rap and rock ‘n’ roll fan. 🙂 So thanks for that compliment, Kim. I’m very glad 🙂
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Nicely written!
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Many thanks, Sudeep 🙂
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You are welcomed, mrityunjay.
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Nice blog!
Do visit to my blog and follow it if you like…
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Many thanks, Shristy!
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