I wake up to the dulcet chanting of birds and quivering of tree branches. The Sun hidden under rip-roaring clouds. I go to the terrace singing 'Here comes the Sun' and leave rice for the birds to feed on. Then I go to my desk, a poem already stowed in my mind. I try to embellish it by making use of Roget's Thesaurus:- The clouds stole the Sun and cried lines of winter rain-- tempestuous, swift, torrential, heavy, violent, rapid, soaking, pattering, thrumming, numbing, freezing, nippy, chilly, bitterly cold. All the birds went in their nests and the neighbors, all in their homes.
© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2022 All Rights Reserved
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Prompt
1. Write a SOUND POEM which includes AT LEAST ONE from EACH of the FIVE HEARING CATEGORY SELECTIONS below: (reference the hearing words you chose in your post).
- bellow; clink; drone; jingle; quiver;
- clamour; dissonant; rip-roaring; tempestuous; vociferous;
- dulcet: honeyed; poetic; sonorous; tonal;
- blabber; cackle; dribble; gurgle; seethe;
- beseech; chant; drawl; embellish; intone
Feel free to dip deeper into your chosen words by elaborating further from the Thesaurus with synonyms and antonyms
AND/OR
2. Simply write about the Thesaurus – what it means to you; describe it, have fun with it. Let the synonyms flow, or antagonise with antonyms.
I’ve done both.
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~Jay
you paint a charming picture with these words and I particularly liked
“cried lines of winter rain–“
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Thanks for reading in and commenting, Laura ❤
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“The clouds stole the Sun
and cried lines of winter rain”
Wonderful imagery here
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Thankyou, Kim ❤
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Despite the use of all the thesaurus words, there is a beautiful simplicity in this which sings through, Jay!
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Many thanks, Ingrid! ❤
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“The clouds stole the Sun
and cried lines of winter rain–
tempestuous, swift, torrential, heavy,
violent, rapid, soaking, pattering,
thrumming, numbing, freezing,
nippy, chilly, bitterly cold.”
I enjoyed these descriptions, Jay. 🙂
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Thank you, Aishwarya 🙂 ❤ (I hope I've got your name correctly)
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Yes, you got my name right. Thanks. 🙂
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This is so clever! Is the second stanza the poem that you had in your head, M Jay? That’ so meta – I love it 😀
❤
David
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Thank you, David ❤ Yes the second poem is what I had in mind, I like meta poetry, DR Bogdan has some awesome collection of those!
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lovely imagery here
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Thank you 🙂
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The opening stanza is so relatable and in the second stanza you made good use of the thesaurus.
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Thank you very much ❤🙂
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You are welcome. ❤️😊
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I love how you used sound words to paint the season… like those rip-roaring clouds
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Many thanks 🙂
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‘I wake up to the dulcet chanting of birds and quivering of tree branches.’ ~ such a lovely way to wake up.
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I agree, Carol. Thank you ❤🙂
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Beautiful write Jay. Loved your imagery!
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Thank you, Radhika! ❤
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Excellent! Very impressive dong both.
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that was meant to be “doing both”
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Big thanks, Kate! 🙂
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Thanks for sharing!
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