Minute Poem

Since she's gone, my heart is pining.
Stars are shining,
Moon is burning,
dawn is coming.

I sit alone on the terrace.
look out, there is
a flock of birds.
Mind's full of words.

Poetry mends the broken heart, 
when love departs,
I write a piece,
my heart's at peace. 

© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2022 All Rights Reserved

Posted over at dverse

Prompt

To write a minute poem. The elements of the Minute Poem are:

1. narrative poetry.
2. a 12 line poem made up of 3 quatrains. (3 of 4-line stanzas)
3. syllabic, 8-4-4-4   8-4-4-4   8-4-4-4 (First line has 8 syllables of each stanza.  Remaining lines has 4 syllables in each stanza)
4. rhymed, rhyme scheme of aabb ccdd eeff.
5. description of a finished event (preferably something done is 60 seconds).
6. is best suited to light verse, likely humorous, whimsical or semi-serious.

I am not very happy with this poem, I think it could’ve been better but nothing else was coming to my mind so I had to post it.

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  1. Close Encounters of the Strange Kind
    (My minute poem.)

    I come from another planet
    My mouth looks planted
    My forehead is sloped
    My eyes are so dope.

    My small ship landed nearby here
    Noisy all could hear.
    Bright lights in the dark
    Human hearts jump start.

    I wave to the scared Earthlings there.
    They wave back much scared.
    Say, I come in peace.
    Their fear now on ceased.

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