Since she's gone, my heart is pining. Stars are shining, Moon is burning, dawn is coming. I sit alone on the terrace. look out, there is a flock of birds. Mind's full of words. Poetry mends the broken heart, when love departs, I write a piece, my heart's at peace.
© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2022 All Rights Reserved
Posted over at dverse
Prompt
To write a minute poem. The elements of the Minute Poem are:
1. narrative poetry.
2. a 12 line poem made up of 3 quatrains. (3 of 4-line stanzas)
3. syllabic, 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4 8-4-4-4 (First line has 8 syllables of each stanza. Remaining lines has 4 syllables in each stanza)
4. rhymed, rhyme scheme of aabb ccdd eeff.
5. description of a finished event (preferably something done is 60 seconds).
6. is best suited to light verse, likely humorous, whimsical or semi-serious.
I am not very happy with this poem, I think it could’ve been better but nothing else was coming to my mind so I had to post it.
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~Jay
i liked it.
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Thank you very much, Arturo ❤🙏
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I think you have done full justice to the prompt Jay. 👍🏻
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Thank you, kind Radhika 🙏❤
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Close Encounters of the Strange Kind
(My minute poem.)
I come from another planet
My mouth looks planted
My forehead is sloped
My eyes are so dope.
My small ship landed nearby here
Noisy all could hear.
Bright lights in the dark
Human hearts jump start.
I wave to the scared Earthlings there.
They wave back much scared.
Say, I come in peace.
Their fear now on ceased.
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This is great, a minute poem with a sci fi twist! Loved it.
You can post it on your blog and add the link to dverse linky, that way more ppl would be able to read this beautiful poem.
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i will. thanks M Jay. 🙂
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It’s a pleasure, Arturo. ❤🤗
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This was a beautiful piece! Thank you for posting, internet stranger. I could close my eyes and imagine being there and feeling the same. You’ve inspired me to exercise the poetry part of my brain 🧠
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Thanks so much, it’s nice to meet you! I’m glad my poem resonated with you. 🙂
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Poetry definitely can help heal a broken heart. I love what you did here…very sweet.
Gayle ~
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Thank you v much, Gayle ❤🙂
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I completely agree with you here! Poetry is a way of healing one’s heart, and it really can be cathartic. 🙂 Nice poem!
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Thank you, Veera ❤🤗
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It’s true isn’t it…you are right to write…the therapy is there, at the fingertips and the screen…
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Thank you, Ain. Yes, it’s true🙂❤
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This is beautifully deep and poignant 💝💝
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Many thanks, Sanaa! ❤ 🙂
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such a delightful write, poetry sure is cathartic!
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Thanks a lot, Kate 🙂❤
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I absolutely believe in the healing power of poetry. I like the peace the writer finds at the end.
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Thank you, Lisa. ❤
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You’re welcome, Jay ❤
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Love this specially as it sings:
Poetry mends the broken heart,
when love departs,
I write a piece,
my heart’s at peace.
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Thank you so much, Grace ❤🙂
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This poem seems effortless. Beautifully written, Jay! Writing poems can bring us peace. ❤ Have a lovely weekend!
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Thank you, Cheryl. Have a great weekend yourself. ❤
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Great rhythm if and poem for the prompt Jay!🙌👍🏼❤️
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Many thanks, Cindy. ❤ ❤
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Pleasure!!❤️
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Truly, poetry is the calming force for any lovelorn moments. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting. I’m glad! ❤✌🏼
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Poetry is truly a salve for a broken heart! ❤️
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I agree, Punam, thank you ❤
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You are welcome, Jay. 😊
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Beautiful! ❤
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Thank you, Kate ❤
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Thanks for sharing! 🙂 ❤
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Poetry may be healing… but it can also be painful writing
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Lovely!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Great work. Keep it up 👍
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Thanks a lot! 💖
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