The extra toothbrush The empty spot on the sofa The extra chair The empty side of the bed The extra dessert The empty room The extra love. The empty space The extra space. Dandruff on the comb Honey in the morn A Beatles song Number thirteen and guava worms.
© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2022 All Rights Reserved
posted over at dverse
A/N: Last month my little bro, Dhananjay, left for college. I’ve dedicated this one to him. In the last stanza of this poem, first letters of each line spell out his name, DHAN.
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Take care
~Jay ❤
Nicely done, Jay. It was very clever to spell out his name in the end like that.
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Many thanks, Tanmay. 🙂
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This poem is a pure delight … like honey.
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Thank you, Helen 😊
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what a lovely tribute so cleverly done Jay! 💞
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Many thanks, Cindy 💖
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You’re so welcome Jay!
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Jay, I can tell you are missing him. I hope you share this poem with Dhan. Will you go visit him at college?
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I shared this with him the instant I finished writing it and yeah, it’s 600 kms away but maybe I’ll go visit him in December. I do miss him, thank you Lisa😊
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I’m so glad you and he are close. My two sons are very close with each other also. You’re very welcome, Jay.
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Eloquent poem, great photo, Jay! ❤
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Thank you so much, Cheryl. 😊❤️
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Such a heart felt poem about your brother. I can tell you are missing him a lot. Thanks for sharing !
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Thank you very much, Grace! 💖
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very, very sweet, M Jay ❤
your love for your brother comes through!
~David
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Thank you very much, David 💖
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Sweet. You must be missing him so much.
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Thanks a lot, Punam 💖
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Well done on a lovely poem. All the best to your brother. XoXo
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Thanks a lot, dear Selma. 🙂
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It is hard to part like that… i hope you get many possibilities to come together again.
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Thank you 🙂
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