As I walk out
The twin girls in my neighborhood
Give me double smiles
They're getting ready for school
Golden dawn
Streets deserted
A light spring rain
Feels refreshing
On the sidewalk
I see a woman
With beautiful eyes
Blue like the sea
I cross a lingerie shop
And a parlor--Lemon Beauty Care
Both closed
This early in the morning
I'm halfway through my walk
The fading moon gives silver smiles
The sun's orange progress is good today
Winter is gone with its ice follies
Plants and trees are giving out love calls
Butterflies are dancing from flower to flower.
© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2024 All Rights Reserved
Written for dverse where Merril is hosting Tuesday Poetics.
Prompt
Merril says, “Below you will find some names of daffodil varieties. Choose at least 3 words/phrases to use in your poem, but you may choose more. If the name is more than one word, you must use both words. There is no required form or length. Your poem does NOT have to be about daffodils or spring, and there is no restriction on form, style, or subject. I’m eager to see what poems spring from these words!”
(I’ve bolded the ones I chose)
baby boomer
beautiful eyes
double smiles
Dutch master
February gold
goblet
golden dawn
golden echo
ice follies
lemon beauty
lingerie
love call
Merlin
narcissus,
orange progress,
pink pride
Professor Einstein
sentinel
silver smiles
sovereign
split corona
Tahiti
Tete a Tete
Thalia
white lion
Splendid use of the daffodil’s varieties, Jay. 🙂
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Thank you, Aishwarya. 💛🙂
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Wow, Jay. You’ve encapsulated the beautiful scenario the walk quite well.
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Thank you very much, Aboli. 💛😊
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I so enjoyed walking with you, Jay, and seeing the sights with your eyes. Thank you! It was a lovely walk seeing the smiling twins, the beautiful woman, the shops, and the light, spring rain. 💙
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Thank you very much, Merril. 🙏💙
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You’re welcome, Jay! 😊
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So good!
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Many thanks! ❤️
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Very well written, Jay. I felt like I was walking with you in the morning sunshine.
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Thank you, Dwight! 😊🙏
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You are welcome.
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I love all the things happening in your neighborhood on a spring walk… lovely to walk with you.
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Thank you very much, Björn. 🙂🙏
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