He went to the sea in a thimble of poetry
Poet Warning, Jim Harrison
He was having trouble keeping up with the times. He was a poet and a blogger. Kids these days were all about Youtube and vlogs, none of them read anything anymore and there he was who still practiced writing with pen and pad. He reminisces, standing under the shower, about when he was a kid and it was spring he'd fly kites on the sea shore, wearing his mother's thimble to protect his forefinger from getting cut by the manja. After taking the bath he got nostalgic and went to the sea with his pen and pad. There he sat on the sandy seashore and mused over the sighing sea-- "Ageless sea, can you return me my spring kite, which had a hand-drawn illustration of a little boy chasing butterflies on it and which you took away from me. I cried because I loved it, like how I'm crying now because I loved that kid and my mother's thimble which she gave me from her sewing kit, so that I can fly kites safely. Oh, ageless sea can you return me my spring days?"
© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2022 All Rights Reserved
Posted over at dverse
It took two days to come up with a piece for this prompt, I struggled a lot, at first I was thinking of writing a square poem using the epigraph but I couldn’t do it! So I settled for a free verse poem, I hope you guys like it.
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Great poem.
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This is a wonderful poem.
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This brings in a whiff of nostalgic melancholy Jay. Beautifully penned!
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Thanks a lot, Radhika! ❤
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Well written. Unearthing nostalgia for sure.
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Many thanks, Dee! (^_^)
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We always miss our those days! Beautifully written thanks 💕☺🎉
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Thank YOU, Priti ❤🙏
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It’s my pleasure 🎉💓
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Terribly dad soaked in the seaspray of nostalgia, and also worrying about the vlogs and the lack of reading…a poem penned from your heart…
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Thank you, Ain ❤😊
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We all long for our days of youth and you have portrayed yours so well!
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Thanks a lot, Linda! 😊
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You’re welcome.
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Great poem, filled with nostagia!
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Thank you! 🤗🤗
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🙏💙🙏
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Beautiful nostalgia fetched from your sea of memories. How do we recapture past moments? Surely through poetry.
Nice one!!!
Much love…
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Thank you very much ❤😊✌🏼
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Two days of struggle resulted in an incredibly lovely poem …. we the beneficiaries.
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Many thanks, Helen ❤🙏
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I love how you used the thimble for kite flying, and that memory of losing a kite, and your musing about writing…it was worth the waiting.
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Thanks a lot. 🙏😊
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Definitely worth the wait! “Koi lauta de mere bitey huy din….”. Nostalgia laced with desolation. Well penned, Jay. ❤️
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Thank you, dear Punam. ❤
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My pleasure. 😊
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Thank you for sharing!🙂
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Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I really appreciate! 🙂
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This is very beautiful work, Jay. How you brought that thimble in at the end was just perfect!
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Thank you, Ingrid! 🤗❤
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I’m a pen and paper girl too Jay!
Loved your poem! ❤️
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Thank you, Cindy! I’m glad. ❤
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You’re welcome Jay! ❤️
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Beautiful and soulful, M Jay!
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Thank you! 🙏❤
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