On an old Neem tree Whose trunk is black and sooty Sits a lone white dove. If only I could repair my wings and fly to find love.
Posted over at EIF where Ingrid is hosting Tanka challenge!
What is a Tanka?
A Tanka is a Japanese form of poetry. It has five lines and thirty-one syllables in 5/7/5/7/7 format, giving a complete picture of an event or mood. It has an ‘upper’ and ‘lower’ element, and a ‘turn’ from the former to the latter.
M. Jay Dixit, 2021
Nice imagery!
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Thanks, Tricia! ^_^
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Very interesting!
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Ooh love this!!!!
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Thank you, Avni! 🙂
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beautiful
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Thanks, K! 🙂
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Wonderful imagery. Love the color and light contrasts too. Well penned👍😊
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V glad u liked it! Thank you😊🙏
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A pleasure 😊
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