On a boat, just me and her, and as I'm about to kiss her she whispers, "Wait, watch how the Moon flickers in the winter river. The crescent Moon's silver shadow shimmers and as the cold wind delivers a chilly ripple, the shadow shivers."
© M. Jay Dixit, September heart-to-hearts, 2022 All Rights Reserved
Posted over at dverse
Prompt
Use shiver–or some form of the word—in a poem of exactly 44 words. The form is up to you. Shiver in rhyme, or shiver in free verse. Shiver in the past, present, or future.
I’ve chosen to write a free verse poem with each line’s end word rhyming with ‘shiver’. I listened to one of my favorite rolling stones track while I wrote this poem.
Awwwwww….
🥰
David
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Thank you, David! ❤
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Honestly, it’s beautiful
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I really like this, from the title to the end
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Thanks a lot, I am glad you enjoyed it! (^_^)
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Haha! As a poet, Jay, are you yourself never guilty of this? Lovely, charming poem! 🙂 Wonderful humor!
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Thanks Cheryl! I confess that I do start to ramble about the beauty surrounding us whenever I go out haha, glad you enjoyed the humor. 🙂 ❤
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This is lovely, Jay! ❤️
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Thank you, Poonam! ❤🙂
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You are welcome. 😊
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Loved this Jay!
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Thanks v much! 🙂
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Love the romantic fun interlude Jay! Excellent! 💖💖👏👏
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Yay! Thanks v much, Cindy ❤ ❤
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double Yay and you’re most welcome!💖
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Tender.
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Thank you, Selma! ❤
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So sweet. I love the shivering moon shadow. That would be me–look at the moon, the light, the shadows! 🤣
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Thankyou, Merril! 🙂 I do that too😂
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🤣
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a fun romantic rhyme!
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Many thanks, Kate! 😊
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pleasure Jay!
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Such a romantic version
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Thank you, Athira! 😊
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My pleasure Jay
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Dating a poet is fun! Especially if you happen to be one yourself 😅
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Hehe that’s true. Thanks Ingrid. 🙏😊
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I love the romance but I will be scared of the shadow shivering though. Good one!
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Thank you very much 😊
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